1. Even though your webpages weren't uploaded on the website, I'm still proud of the work you do. You did a good job in presenting what you did in your first semester.
2. I like how you made your querencia essay. It shows much "idea" and how you missed where we used to live.
3. I would like you to work on your Word Choice. The reason why is that you need to use more variety in your words. Desiree, I know you always try your hardest and that's all I want from you. Do good in school and keep up the good work.
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